The Legend of Marie Winterbottom
by S.B.
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This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, events, and incidents are the products of the author's imagination. Any resemblance to actual people, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental. All the characters are over 18.
Every soul in Cleas, living or dead, had a version of Marie Winterbottom’s legend.
Children, with their twisted imagination hiding behind a facade of innocence, often said: “She was murdered by her own family, or a scorned lover.”
The mothers, their faces pale with worry, repeated their own tales at kitchen tables: Marie wandering the back pasture in a bloodstained dress, and beckoning husbands to the edge of the pond on fog-heavy nights...
The old men at the pub recounted their own, each story colored by the dregs of whiskey and the need to outdo the last: Once, Mrs. Winterbottom had been the fairest girl in Cleas, and then she’d vanished on a thunderous single night, and her vengeful soul is still waiting for the fools who dare trespass in the ruins of Creek Manor.
Only the priest at St. Cronan’s refused to speak her name. Anyone who pressed him was met with silence and nothing more. Still, Marie’s memory, like her spirit, loitered in every threshold, and every patch of bracken. No one could walk past the iron gate of Creek Manor without the certainty that something watched from the gaping windows.
Most people accepted this as a tax of living in Cleas. The manor was a solid mile past any other house, and only the foolhardy stayed after sunset. The stories were a preventative, a way to keep children from wandering too far, and teenagers from drinking themselves sick in the barn behind the manor. Over time, Marie’s status as victim, villain, or cautionary emblem blurred into a single warning: Stay out, or be haunted.
Which was why, when Jim Hayes first arrived in Cleas, he understood immediately that the only way to get to the heart of the place was through Marie. He’d spent the last two years chasing rumors and apparitions through the bogs and valleys of the Irish midlands, discovering that the only thing more persistent than a ghost story was the person who went looking for it.
The early April air in Cleas was ripe with pollen, the willows along the riverbank shedding their tendrils into the water. He’d stepped off the bus at the crossroads and been greeted by a teenage girl in a track jacket and rubber boots, who eyed his wire-rimmed glasses and dog-eared notebook more times than he could number.
“You’re the new man from the paper, then?” she asked. “Ma'am says you’re after the ghost.”
Jim, who had interviewed dozens of townies in his life, recognized the invitation. “Only if the ghost wants to be found.”
She regarded this for a moment, then nodded. “You’ll want to speak to Mr. Crummey at the filling station. His brother saw her once.”
“Did he talk to her?”
The girl’s upper lip curled in disbelief. “You’re not supposed to do that, mister. She only wants to talk to men who did her wrong.”
She made a little sign of the cross with the tip of her finger and jogged off down the road, her boots squelching in the mud.
Jim smiled, jotting down her words as the bus shuddered away behind him. He was in Cleas no more than two hours before he had heard five distinct versions of the Marie story, each more contradictory than the last. By the time he checked into the floral B&B above the bakery, he had a dozen names and half a dozen places to start his research: the riverbank, the ruins of the manor, the graveyard with the toppled crosses, and the old animal burial ground past the willows.
Despite his reputation in journalistic circles as a “ghost-hunter,” Jim disliked the term. He described himself as a collector of contradictions, a translator of the unspeakable. His first experience with the dead came at thirteen, in a brownstone apartment in Chicago, when his great-aunt Helen had appeared at the foot of his bed, holding her own severed wrist. She had said three words: “Get out, Jimmy.” Three minutes later, the carbon monoxide alarm in the hallway went off, and the entire building was evacuated. He’d been checking the corners of his rooms for visitors ever since. At twenty-six, he’d left a steady gig at the Tribune to chase stories no one else wanted, and somewhere along the way, his ability to see the dead matured from freakish hallucination to genuine talent.
He concealed it well. No one, not even his editor in Dublin, knew that Jim’s interviews with “living witnesses” were only half the story. The other half, he kept to himself: the fleeting glimpses, the voices in empty rooms, the icy hands on his shoulders in the predawn hours. He’d learned quickly that the restless dead had no patience for skepticism, and that their messages, when they came, were never what the living wanted to hear.
On the evening of April 5th, with the blue moon visible between shreds of cloud, Jim walked out to Creek Manor. He followed the river until he reached the bridge, then turned along the overgrown trail that locals called “the Last Mile.” The manor was less a house than a ruin, three stories of shattered glass and crumbling stone, with black mold arcing across the walls like frost patterns. The only sign of life was a single candle flickering in the broken front window.
Jim exhaled and traced the perimeter before entering. The air within was cold and sweet, like old tea left out overnight. The floorboards groaned under his shoes, and something unseen scurried beneath the stairs. He saw her at once, standing in the bay window on the far side of the parlor, her back to him, shoulders trembling.
She wore a faded yellow dress, hemmed above her ankles. Her hair, in contrast to the stories, was not gold but a muddy brown, and cropped close to the scalp. The only constant in all the stories about Marie Winterbottom was her youth - she had died at twenty-one, and her face was locked in the bloom of it, all cheekbones and wide, hopeful eyes.
“Hello,” Jim said.
She did not turn. “You can see me?”
He nodded. “Yes. My name is Jim Hayes. I’ve come to speak with you.”
She laughed. “You’re the first one in years to admit it. Most just pretend they don’t, even when I stand right in front of them. You are a reporter, I take it.”
Marie spun to face him, crossing her arms. The candlelight glimmered through her, illuminating the veins on her forearm and the delicate hollow above her collarbone.
"Is it that obvious?" he asked.
“Yes. Your kind is always so transparent,” she replied, unironically. “Is it the story you want, or something else?”
Jim considered. “Both. I’d like to help, but I’ll settle for understanding.”
Marie’s lips thinned. “Do you know why I haunt this place?”
He shrugged. “You tell me.”
She stepped closer, each footfall making no sound. He saw then that her eyes were different colors: one green, one slate blue, a trick of the light that unsettled him.
She said, “I’m trapped. Something of mine keeps me here. A locket, stolen by the groundskeeper the night I died. Without it, I can’t leave the grounds.”
Jim fished a pen from his pocket and jotted this down. “Would you like me to retrieve it?”
Marie studied him. “Why would you do that for me?”
He hesitated, searching for the honest answer under layers of curiosity and professional pride. “I think it would be interesting to see what happens when a legend is completed. Most stories don’t get to the end.”
Marie smiled, the right corner of her mouth quirking upward. “You’re a strange man, Mr. Hayes.”
“So I’ve been told.”
In the hour that followed, Jim sat with her on a tattered divan by the window, asking questions and listening as she recounted her brief life. She was the daughter of an English land agent and an Irish mother who died young. Her father drank and gambled away the family’s fortune, and Marie spent her adolescence fending off creditors and distant relatives. She was courted, briefly, by a local teacher, but he took ill and died, leaving her with a reputation as a cursed woman. The story ended, as stories do, with a night of violence: her father, drunk and enraged, had tried to chase her out of the house with a fireplace poker, while a handful of servants watched in silence. There was a struggle, and Marie fell down the stairs. Her father hid her body in the stables until the groundskeeper could dispose of it. The locket, her mother’s, was pried from her neck and buried. The father vanished, and the groundskeeper was later found drowned in the millrace, lips blue and hands clutching a fistful of silver.
Jim’s notes filled several pages, but he barely glanced at them. Each word Marie spoke vibrated in the air, as if she were imprinting herself on the room. The clock in the hall struck midnight, and Marie’s outline grew fainter.
“I have to go,” she whispered. “Are you sure you want to help me?”
Jim stood in the hollowed-out parlor, the blue moon riding high above the manor’s shattered roofline, Marie’s last words echoing in his ears. He found himself agreeing, in the way one agrees in a dream where all roads run downhill. “If that’s what it takes to solve your issues, yes. Tell me where it is, and I’ll go find it.”
Marie’s mouth twisted with disbelief. “Really?”
“Yes,” he said, and felt a cold urge in his chest, like the first swig of gin on an empty stomach.
Marie drifted closer, her voice low and confessional: “Past the first row of willows, slightly turned to the east, there’s a marker with a red stone. Fifty paces north from there, you’ll find an old animal burial ground. My locket is there, right where the road ends.” She hesitated, as though the next bit required a favor from the living. “Please… if you’re serious, bring it to me as quickly as possible.”
“I’m already on my way,” he said, and was.
He walked the path as if pulled on a string, past the river and the rows of willows, their drooping arms shivering in the wind. The clouds had all but vanished, and the stars looked like a scattering of bones. He had to bushwhack through a bramble that snagged the cuffs of his jeans, then scale a half-collapsed stone fence, and on the other side was the cemetery, if one could call it that: a field of low, crude markers, mostly nameless, but here and there a painted rock or chunk of slate, commemorating a foxhound or sheepdog long since gone. The world grew quiet around him, except for the wet sucking of his boots in the grass.
He found the marker at the edge of the plot, red as a split lip. From there, he counted the paces north, feeling almost ridiculous, but the compulsion was absolute. At fifty he stopped, backlit by the moon, and dug into the wet earth with a flat stone. The dirt was compacted, and after five minutes of labor he hit something hard. It was a tin, old and rusted, the kind that might have once held cough drops or licorice pastilles. He pried it open with the edge of his notebook, hands trembling, and inside, nestled in a bed of faded blue cloth, was her locket.
It was not the ornate Victorian piece he had imagined, but a simple silver oval, almost childish, on a frayed chain. He fished it out and turned it over in his palm. There was a catch, and inside the locket he expected to find a face, or a lock of hair. Instead, there was only a dried red smear in the shape of a teardrop. A single drop of blood, long crystallized.
The air around him grew stale. Even the insects and the night birds silenced themselves. He dropped the tin to the ground, pocketed the locket, and retraced his steps, feeling the object’s weight pulling on his spine.
He did not remember crossing the river again, only arriving at the manor’s threshold, his hand already raised to knock on the sagging door. Marie stood inside, waiting, as if she had seen his every step.
“You found it,” she said. Her voice was thinner now, stretched between euphoria and hunger.
He held the locket up, like an offering. "Yes, I have."
She came forward, the hem of her dress flickering with each stride, and reached for the locket. Her hand passed through it, then recoiled.
“Put it on,” she said.
“Shouldn’t you—?”
“No. It has to be you. That’s how it works.” Her eyes were huge, and he could not tell if she was frightened or exultant.
He hesitated, but already his fingers were unclasping the chain, threading it around his neck. The silver was cold and stung his skin. As soon as the clasp snapped shut, a bolt of energy ran through his torso. His vision blurred and doubled. For a moment he was outside himself, watching a man in a raincoat slump to his knees on the rotten floorboards.
Marie hovered before him, her face inches from his now. Her ethereal fingers brushed the locket, sending blue sparks up his collarbone.
“Good,” she said. “Now we are joined. You’re the first in a long time to obey. Most men run away from me. But not you. You’re an investigator at heart. You want to know how the story ends.”
Jim was practically frozen. The cold spread to his jaw, his tongue, his fingertips. Each part of his body ached with a new and foreign intelligence, like a marionette coming to life on unfamiliar strings.
Marie grinned, and for the first time, the smile reached her eyes. “You can't imagine how relieved I am. I spent years talking to parishioners and farmhands, priests and drunks, but they always forgot, or pretended to. Sometimes they even stole from me. You came out of nowhere and fixed everything. This is amazing.”
He tried to form a reply, but the words stuck, muffled by the sensation of cotton packing his mouth.
She bent down and stroked his hair. “Would you like to leave now?”
He found himself nodding, terrified at the sudden turn of events.
Her expression changed, becoming sharper and more alive. “I have a better idea,” she said, and the words echoed as if spoken in stereo, one voice inside his skull and one in the air. “Kneel.”
Jim frowned, but his knees buckled anyway, the old floor groaning in protest. The locket grew heavier with each breath, irradiating something between pain and pleasure.
“Good boy. Now, put your hands behind your head.”
He did.
“We are now connected by that drop of blood - my mother’s, passed to me, and now, to you. The longer you wear this trinket, the more you’ll feel me inside you. You’re no longer a reporter; you’re my slave. Say it.”
The words rose from his throat unbidden: “I’m your slave, Marie.”
“Good slave.” She cooed. “Now, I can leave. I’ve been bound here for so long, I barely remember how to walk in the world, but your body serves as an anchor, tethering me to the outside. Wherever you go, I go. And there is so much to do. So many old debts to settle. Even if the men who wronged me are dust, their blood is not gone from the world. Vengeance is a generational affair.” She cocked her head, regarding him fondly. “We’re going to visit those who remain. You have a car, yes?”
“Yes, Marie,” said the voice through Jim’s lips.
“Mistress Marie,” she corrected. “Get up and take me to your vehicle. Our little road trip begins now.”
He rose. The locket burned against his chest, but the ache was already familiar, like the residue of a healed scar. As he followed her out into the moonlit garden, Jim felt his own self receding, like the tide pulling back from a rocky shore, leaving only footprints and the memory of something clever and stubborn, waiting for the chance to return.
Mistress Marie led the way, and Jim followed, the silver chain itching at his neck. The night was full of promise, and the future full of names, unaware of their impending demise.
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