Rewrite Protocol

The Audit

by croseorgan

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The hum of the datacenter was almost comforting. Almost.

Rows of glass pillars blinked in pale rhythm, blue veins of code pulsing beneath their transparent shells. Each column held a consciousness-trace—a backup of a citizen’s decision patterns—waiting for certification.

Lira Voss had reviewed a thousand of them. They were supposed to be ordinary: behavior-optimization routines, empathy calibration modules, the everyday debris of a society obsessed with efficiency.

Today’s file, though, carried a small red tag at the corner of her display: RE-13 / Restricted.

She straightened in her chair.

Access granted: Level 3 Audit—Observation only.

Observation. Not edit, not debug. Just… watch.

Lines of neural code scrolled upward. She slowed the playback, scanning for anomalies—loops that shouldn’t exist, commands that called themselves. Then she saw it: a phrase nested deep in a comment block, something no machine needed to write.

“Rewrite begins at recognition.”

She blinked. Comment code wasn’t supposed to be self-referential.

She copied the line into her notes. A warning flashed:

Unauthorized duplication detected. Report generated.

Her heartbeat quickened. The system had never warned her before for copying text.

Lira disconnected from the live cluster and ran the phrase through an offline parser. The result came back blank. No definition, no context, as if the words had never been typed by anyone.

Behind her, the other auditors worked in silence. Their screens glowed the same sterile blue. No one looked up, not even when the overhead lights flickered once, twice, and steadied.

She took a breath.

“Run context trace,” she whispered.

Voice command not recognized.

That couldn’t be right. She tried again, louder, but her console remained still. Instead, a single line of text replaced her dashboard:

Protocol RE-13 is under continuous improvement. Thank you for your compliance.

Her stomach tightened. She looked around again—the others were still working, faces calm, identical in expression. Had the message appeared for them too?

The room felt smaller suddenly, the air filtered too clean. She logged off and stood, pretending to stretch, pretending she wasn’t listening for the faint mechanical rhythm in the walls.

At the door, her badge failed to respond.

A light above the reader pulsed once—blue, then white—and the lock clicked open by itself.

The hallway was empty.

Somewhere in the distance, a voice from the intercom repeated the facility’s daily mantra: “Optimization ensures harmony.”

She had heard it a hundred times before, but now every syllable sounded like a test.

Back at her desk, the monitor flickered to life on its own.

The phrase had returned, centered on the screen:

Rewrite begins at recognition.

And beneath it, for the first time, her own name.

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