Just Right
by Weedwhackeraccident
I really like thinking of ways that classic fairy tales could be modified to be femdom hypnokink stories. Sometimes it's pretty easy, i.e Cinderella or Sleeping Beauty, and then sometimes it's very difficult, i.e Princess and the Pea. Goldilocks and the Three Bears is a bit of a weird one, but I think I really made good use of the original story's motif of "Too X, Too Y, Just right". Obviously all characters involved are 18+, and I also left it intentionally vague whether or not they're regular humans or bear-people because I think it works better that way. I also chose not to give the POV character a name since I couldn't decided on one, which hopefully hasn't made the story too confusing to parse.
She was trying so hard to resist. She knew that she couldn’t let herself give in, that she couldn’t let herself fall asleep, but it was just so difficult to resist. So difficult to think at all, even. It felt like her mind was submerged in warm, thick honey, so hard to move, so hard to do anything but float in the warmth… Pretty, golden honey, like the pretty golden hair waving gently back and forth before her eyes… Back… Forth… Back… Forth… The soothing glimmer sent waves of gentle calm through her body, and her body relaxed ever so slightly more. “Mmmmmnngrrghh… No…” She tried to push herself up as a soft, silken voice laughed in her ear. “Shhhh, don’t resist~ Just submit to me~ You know you want to~” And she did… She did want to submit, so much… But she knew she needed to resist… Knew she couldn’t let this strange lady hypnotize her just as she had done her parents…
She growled weakly and tried to push the lady away, but the lady just chuckled warmly again and gently stroked behind her ear, sending a soft pulse of pleasure throughout her body. Trying to ignore how pleasant the touch made her feel, she slowly raised her arm and attempted to strike the lady. But her arm hardly moved, in spite of all her strength, and all she could muster was gently bapping the lock of hair hanging before her eyes, causing it to begin swaying and shimmering again… Her arm dropped back down, suddenly feeling so warm and sluggish. The hypnotist laughed again, the motion softly rocking her body. “Awwww, how adorable~! Still trying so hard to fight back~ Even as you’re growing So Sleepy, growing So Tired, eyes Drooping for Me, Down, Deep Down into My spell, Falling, Sleeping, Warm and Cozy~” The lady’s hypnotic patter washed over her mind, and she began to relax yet more, sinking into her warm, soft bed… And into the lady’s warm, soft arms…
The lady gently stroked her neck, and a growl turned into a sleepy purr. “You know, you’re so much more fun than your parents~” The mention of her parents sent another surge of resistance through her, but it all melted away as a gentle finger touched her forehead and pushed down, down, down, sinking her back into softness. “Your father was so resistant to my charms, and so angry too~ He fought back every step of the way, and I had to try my hardest just to not get hurt by him~ And even now, as he sleeps on that uncomfortable mattress of his, he still looks so displeased, even in a deep, blissful trance as he is~ He was much too resistant~” The lady gently pet her hair, almost as a reward for her submission. “And your mother, on the other hand, was too easy. All it took was a glance into her eyes and a gentle yet firm command to Sleep, and she melted~ No challenge, no chance to practice my more entertaining techniques, no fun~ She was so weak that anyone could have sent her to sleep, especially on that far too soft bed of hers~ She was much too submissive~” She attempted to raise an arm to strike again, and the lady gently clasped it. “But you~... You’ve kept your mind just intact enough to force me to stretch my talents~... But are still so wonderfully under my spell, no matter how much you try to struggle~... Not too resistant, not too submissive~...” The lady leaned closer. “You’re Just Right~...”
A warm tingle flowed through her body at the words, and she couldn’t help but make a blissful squeak. The lady chuckled. “Oh, do you like that~? Do you like it when I say you’re Just Right~...?” Another pleasant wave filled her body, and she nodded, a smile beginning to form unresisted on her face. “Awww, well you are~! Everything about you is Just Right~... Even your bed, this wonderful bed you’re relaxing so well for me on~... Not too hard, not too soft~... It’s Just Right~...” She relaxed even further into her bed… The lady was right… Her bed was Just Right… Just like she was… Her eyes were nearly closed, only able to see the mesmerizing golden glimmer swaying back and forth before her… Everything was fading away except for the beautiful lady putting her under a wonderful spell… “And you know what else~? Right now, you’re so deeply, utterly hypnotized~... But not asleep~! You’re in a magical state between wake and sleep, a deep, blissful, suggestible trance where you can’t think of anything but me~... Not awake, and not asleep~... In other words~...” The lady leaned right up to her ear, her voice almost silent yet full of power. “Just~... Right~...” And with those final words, all resistance finally melted away, leaving her in a deep, mindless, blissful trance, snuggled up on her bed in the arms of the lovely lady who owned her mind now… And it felt… Just Right…