A Story That Hypnotises You
by TwyceBitten
So there's a trick I like to do to subs, which is that I tell them a story that hypnotises them. So it's, like, it's a story, of course, and it's got a plot that you can follow. And following the plot, like, working out where you are in the story, takes a lot of focus. So you're giving all your focus to the plot, like, where the story is going, what it's going to do next, that you don't have time to think about where you are in the story. Like, maybe you're not in the story at all. Maybe it's just about someone who's kinda like you, listening to a hypnotic trance, and they're just really enjoying how good it feels to close their eyes. Or maybe it actually feels like that person in the story, the one who started reading a script on the internet and then found their thoughts sort of slowing down and getting duller and darker and weaker, maybe it feels like that's you, and you're the one who started reading a story that hypnotised them.
So anyway, the way this story works is that I keep on reminding them that it's just a story. Like, the moment I do that, they're wide awake again. When you realise you're just reading a story you wake right back up and you realise that you're not being hypnotised at all. It's just that the words of the story that this charater is reading are really easy to follow, so you can kind of follow them with your eyes and focus on nothing else. And maybe even that focus is going to draw the energy out of your arms and legs, so it's harder and harder to move them and your head will start to nod down and your eyes blink a little. That's often the kind of thing that happens when you're reading a story that hypnotises you, right before you drop down deep into trance.
And the story is a really effective tool like that, because the sub starts to lose track of if they're sinking into the story and getting deeper and becoming hypnotised or if they're wide back fully awake and aware. Like, maybe they're switching between the two more and more, so one moment they're deep in trance and the next they're wide awake, or maybe one minute they're awake and the next they're back down deep in trance, deeper than they were before. Waking someone up and putting them back to sleep repeatedly is a technique called fractionation which wakes someone up and drops them back down deeper, and then you can use it to wake them up and drop them back down again even deeper. Maybe you've noticed how many times you've woken up and been dropped back down into trance already, but then again maybe you've lost count, or maybe you've not even noticed that you've been drifting in and out of trance because it was dawning on you instead that if you're a character in this story then I can just say that you're dropping deep into trance and you'll find yourself obeying everything I tell you anyway.
And so the character in this story is just going to lift their left hand up for no reason at all, and maybe you'll find yourself doing the same because it's hot to mirror what a character in a story does, or maybe you'll lift your left hand up because it's hot to believe that I can control your body like this, or maybe you'll be lifting your left hand up because you already think of yourself as the character in my story. Or maybe you weren't imagining being a character in this story before, but now that you've realised how submissive and helpless that would make you feel, you can't get the idea out of your head. And anyway the character in the story is going to drop their left arm back down now and fall back into trance with you.
And maybe they're going to try and lift their left arm again, but they'll only find the strength to lift it a little way up this time, and maybe you will too. Maybe them feeling more tired and weak in their left arm is going to make your arm feel weak and tired too, or maybe you already are them and it's their arm that you're feeling the tiredness in and that arm just has to drop down.
And then maybe it's just going to be the limit of what's possible to lift one of the fingers on that arm before it drops back down and they drop deep into trance, so perfectly deep and helpless and completely in my power.
And that must feel so good, right? Knowing that you're under my control now. Like, for a lot of subs I think that would be kind of a turn-on, because now I could just write in the story that you would start to feel aroused, and you'd start to notice that feeling in your body. And I could even write that you will feel a kind of warm, glowy sensation in your body that feels so amazing, and that at first it's going to fill your whole body and then it's going to start bunching together and concentrating itself, concentrating that feeling wherever it feels best until it's just focused there, so intense as it builds and builds and then suddenly shoots out of your body, leaving you limb and numb and exhausted. And maybe that's actually going to feel like an orgasm, or maybe it's going to feel like something different, something more intense or maybe differently intense, and maybe that feeling of ecstasy is going to last longer and longer when it comes but I know it's just going to feel absolutely amazing when it comes for me right now and all that energy bursts out of your body with a gasp that leaves you mindless and numb and weak.
And that's just such a good feeling that I'm going to allow you to feel that way, sunk down deep in the story and blank and numb and peaceful.
And I'm going to let you feel this way just a little bit longer, and you can stop reading and enjoy this state for as long as you wish. And when you're ready you're going to slowly find yourself waking up again, waking up and finding yourself back where you were, your eyes open and fully awake having just read a story that hypnotises you.
I hope you enjoyed it.
Thats a lovely and clever story - I hope you write more.