Hypnofic in Seussian Rhyme
by MissAlexis887
‘Twas a typical Tuesday
As Beca did study
But tonight, of all nights,
She was feeling all cruddy
Her doctoral thesis
Was nearing completion
When a computer virus
Had caused mass deletion
Her laptop was totaled
Including the backup
Defeated and beaten,
She started to pack up
Suddenly, Chloe,
Her face all a-smile
Came in and said “will you
Be gone for a while?”
Beca burst out and tears,
She sighed as Chloe rocked her,
“What made me think that
I could be a doctor?”
“My work is substandard
And slightly pedantic”
Chloe had an idea that would
Make Bec less frantic
“I’ll be back, need to grab
some stuff from the deck” and
Then Chloe returned
In just a hot second
“I have an idea,
I need you to trust me.”
Beca sighed a big sigh
Although highly unjustly
“I doubt you can help,
Unless you can create a
Kickass new program
For finding lost data”
“This is super less technical
But far more resplendent,
All I need you to do
Is watch my cute pendant”
The gem swung back and forth,
Beca watched it quite avidly,
And to her surprise
Her eyelids sunk quite rapidly
“Sleep for me, sleep for me,
You can’t resist,
And thanks for your triggers,
They greatly assist~”
The brunette was hypnotized,
Her form perpendicular
As Chloe enjoyed their shared
Extracurricular
“Deeper and deeper,
You let yourself sway,
Right into my power
Just let go and obey”
As Beca fell deeper,
Her mind blank and empty,
Chloe stared at her partner,
“Oh, you know how to tempt me!”
Chloe leaned over,
Her red locks cascading,
Her increasing arousal
Was hardly abating
“You know I’m your Mistress,
On that we’ve agreed,
For the focus I give you
Will help you succeed
So call on these feelings,
Your free will you waive,
Just remember your place
As my hypnotized slave…”
Beca fell to her knees,
She was practically prostrate,
Not knowing or caring
Her shirt wasn’t on straight
“I’ve taken control now,
You don’t even want it
So let’s get that damned bee
Right out of your bonnet”
The brunette felt fingers
Pull up on her chin
As she saw Chloe’s eyes
And the spirals therein
Beca’s will was now gone
All her thoughts drained away,
As the hypnotist said,
“Just let go and obey”
The brunette was past any
Trite disobedience
For this trance the redhead had
The best ingredients
“Feeling my collar snug
Around your neck
To keep your anxieties
Securely in check
Now let’s go to bed
We can fix things tomorrow
Before you go jump off Mount
Kilimanjaro”
The lovers slept cuddled
In each other’s arms,
Beca had long since
Succumbed to her charms…
The next day, the brunette had
Slept in till ten
All sublime, oh-so-happy,
Especially zen
Carb-laden breakfast
Appeared at her door,
The redheaded vixen
With pancakes in store
“Before you get worried,
Just don’t have a cow,
Your laptop is fixed
And should get here
knock knock
… ‘bout now.”
Tears of joy streamed down
the submissive’s face,
A whirlwind of blankets
All over the place
“The data’s intact,
My notes are all present!
Oh, Chlo, I’m so sorry,
I was so adolescent”
Chloe flashed a warm smile,
“You’ll get it one day,
All you must do
Is let go, and obey”
The mood struck me to write a hypnofic using rhyming couplets. I showed it to a few friends and they really liked it, so I decided to upload it here. To be fair, I re-read Jukebox's "Trust And Obey" recently so it's entirely possible that elements of it showed up here giggles