Challenges (A microfic collection)

Sad Meal

by ♫Dex

Tags: #cw:noncon #microfiction #dom:female #f/f #multiple_partners #pov:bottom #pov:top #sub:female #sub:nb

October 14th, 2019

Prompt: "Terror"

Sad Meal

"Hello, friend."

An unknown voice. Lucie considered rushing back out, but... She had made it hard to open the door. Intentionally. The thing behind her knew. It must have watched with glee as she turned every key.

It was unfair. She was home! They should be safe! But one of them was inside. And Elise...

"Turn around, friend. Don't be shy."

Her body moved on its own. Lucie tried to resist. She couldn't.

Her only option was to avoid its gaze, to close her eyes.

She could hear heels on hard floor, circling around her. Strokes of fingertips on her body, on her face. She didn't dare look.

"Pretty thing indeed. No wonder she loved you."

Hands grasped her hips, unbuckled her belt. Her pants were pulled down, exposing her. A soft breath fell on her crotch.

"Much better. I want her to taste you... before."

Elise! Lucie tried to open her eyes, tried to look down. But she couldn't. She was stuck. Her ragged breaths turned into sobs.

The creature let out a hearty laugh.

"So precious! I'll make sure to enjoy that too. Then, she can tell me if you taste different, once it's all been drained away."


I redrafted this story so many times. This was also a case of "too many ideas to fit inside the limit", so a lot of them had to be thrown away. As opposed to Bad Decisions, though, I'm significantly happier with how this one turned out - and I think it managed to really encompass the prompt's idea :)

As far as inspirations goes... They're Giveaway by Trilby Else, and its sequel Freerange.

Funnily enough, when seeing that the prompt was "terror", I told myself that I shouldn't copy Trilby Else's plots because it was way too easy of an answer. But, both of these stories are so great (and, to some extent, had such a big impact on how I thought of Trilby Else's work), that I ended up just... Yeah. If you liked this, you'll probably love Freerange.

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