Circlet of Submission

Chapter 11

by BarryBarlow

Tags: #D/s #dom:male #f/m #sub:female #dom:female #sub:male

wove through the crowd, a tray of drinks balanced in her hands, the clink of ice against glass cutting through the hum of chatter. The mansion’s sprawling living room pulsed with life—neighbors from the street, influencers with perfect teeth, and a few Lust Island hopefuls Brandon had roped in. Laughter bounced off the high ceilings, mixing with the thump of bass from speakers Neil had rigged up. She’d swapped her bikini for a sleek black dress that hugged her raindrop curves, a quiet flex of the body the circlet had sculpted. Serving drinks wasn’t her idea of fun, but it kept her moving, watching, piecing things together.

This party was Neil’s idea—his and Brandon’s, hatched during that gym session she’d caught wind of yesterday. She’d heard the clank of weights, Brandon’s easy banter, Neil’s eager replies through the door. Trust, she’d told him, and he’d agreed, promising her a say later. She figured they’d been pumping iron, bonding over sweat and steel, helping Brandon success must have lit a fire under Neil. He’d told her the gossipy neighbours would undermine all their hard work and that Chloe was going to brainwash them into keeping their mouths shut. Was Neil so naive to forget about the women? They gossip far more.

She passed a gin and tonic to a tanned blonde in a crop top—some Instagram girl Brandon knew—then swept her gaze across the room. Neil leaned against the bar, all loose charm and keen eyes, working a gaggle of women like it was his job. His jeans hugged his frame tighter these days, and that cocky tilt to his head felt sharper, more assured. Whatever he’d been up to with Brandon in the gym, it’d done him good. She liked this Neil—focused, in control—even if it came with a whiff of scheming.

Chloe swept by, a knockout in a red dress that barely held her outrageous tits, swapping her usual iced tea for a martini. She’d been electric all day, primping for the spotlight. “Hey, boys” she called, her voice slicing through the noise. “Footy’s on in the den—big screen, cold beers. Move it\!” A cheer went up, and half the room—all the guys, except Neil and Brandon—shuffled after her, drawn like flies to honey. Phil, that quiet producer from down the street, hesitated at the fringes, his eyes flicking to Chloe’s chest before he trailed the pack. Denise smirked. Poor guy was doomed.

The women lingered, splitting into tight little cliques, their gossip sharpening now that the men had cleared out. Denise caught Chloe before she disappeared into the den, tray still poised. “Hey,” she said, her voice low. “Brandon said to remind you—Phil gets a special treat tonight. For tipping us off about the street talk.”

Chloe’s lips twisted into a sly grin. “Oh, I won’t forget. Little Phil’s been leering over me since he scrolled my Insta. I’m not about to let a fan down.” She sashayed off, hips swinging like a metronome. Denise watched her go, a twinge of doubt curling in her chest. Chloe loose with a room of guys—was a wildfire waiting to spark. But Brandon had pushed for it, and Neil had nodded, so here they were. Trust right?

She pivoted back to the women, doling out mojitos with a polished smile. A brunette in a sparkly dress snagged one, her nails tapping the glass. “So, Denise,” she drawled, curiosity thick in her tone, “what’s it like living with Brandon Collard? Word’s out you and Neil are, like, his entourage—or maybe more?”  
Denise’s smile stiffened. There it was—the rumor Phil had flagged, already slinking through the room. “Just mates sharing a big house,” she said, cool and even. “Plenty of space, nothing wild, big mortgage to cover you know.” She slid another drink over, sidestepping the brunette’s probing stare.

Over by the bar, Neil locked eyes with her, mid-flirt with a curvy redhead in a leather skirt. He shot her a grin—half tease, half pledge—then leaned closer, whispering something that made the redhead blush and giggle. Denise’s chest tightened, not from jealousy—she’d made her peace with his roaming—but from a nagging itch. He’d said he’d win the women over, choke the rumors. But how? The circlet sat idle on their bedroom cabinet last she’d checked. Was he just leaning on charm, or had he and Brandon cooked up something slicker?

Denise slid a mojito across the bar to a lanky blonde, her eyes drifting back to Neil’s easy swagger among the women. But then she caught Brandon out of the corner of her eye, leaning against the wall near the patio doors, a beer dangling from his fingers. He was chatting up a curvy brunette in a tight sequined dress, his voice low and smooth, that gym-honed bulk somehow softer in the dim light. The brunette giggled, twirling a lock of hair, her gaze locked on him like he’d just promised her the moon. Denise frowned—Brandon wasn’t usually this slick. Sure, he had the Lust Island charm, all muscle and cheeky grins, but this was different, sharper, like Neil’s newfound knack for turning heads without even trying. 

A crash from the den snapped her out of it—glass breaking, followed by raucous laughter. The women didn’t flinch, too busy picking apart Chloe’s dress or Brandon’s latest post. Denise ditched the tray, grabbed a beer for herself, and edged toward the hall. Time to peek at the boys—and Chloe’s “treat.”

The den reeked of beer and bravado. The TV blasted a football rerun—Premier League, loud and pointless—but no one cared. Chloe stood front and center, dress hitched to her thighs, tits thrust out. The guys—ten or twelve of them—sat slack-jawed, eyes glassy, pants tenting. Phil in the middle, practically drooling, his beer forgotten in his lap. Chloe’s voice purred over them, smooth and firm: “You’re all my good boys, aren’t you? Loyal friends to Brandon, loyal friends to us. No gossip, no nonsense—just love for your neighbour and his mates.”

Denise leaned against the doorframe, sipping her drink, as she watched Chloe weave her spell over the den. The air was thick with beer fumes and the raw musk of men teetering on the edge, their eyes locked on Chloe like she was a siren dragging them under. “Can’t say a word against Brandon, fine guy,” Chloe purred, pacing the room with a slow, deliberate sway, her red dress clinging to her hips, those outrageous tits exposed completely. “And me? I can’t be such a slag if I show you my tits for free, making your cocks so hard. In fact, I’m so nice, I’ll let you pull them out and wank right now.”

The guys fumbled their drinks aside, cans clattering to the floor, amber liquid pooling as they scrambled to unzip in a clumsy, desperate rush. Hands dove into pants, cocks springing free—hard, pulsing, straining toward her like they were tethered by invisible strings. Their stares zeroed in on her chest, those impossible tits that defied gravity, round and full, a perfection that seared itself into their minds. Denise could see it in their glazed eyes, the way their breaths hitched—Chloe’s tits weren’t just flesh; they were a fixation, a hypnotic force unraveling them stitch by stitch. Every subtle bounce as she moved, every jiggle, had them twitching, fingers wrapping tight around their shafts, stroking fast and messy, lost in a fantasy they’d never grasp.

Chloe smirked, gliding through the crowd, her voice a velvet whip cracking over their shattered wills. “Can’t badmouth a slut or her tits once you’ve wanked to them, right?” She paused, leaning close to a stocky guy with a buzz cut, her cleavage looming in his vision like a forbidden promise. “Look at you lot—helpless, drooling, all because of these,” she teased, cupping her tits and giving them a slow, deliberate jiggle, the motion rippling through the room like a shockwave. “You can’t resist me, can you? These tits own you—every twitch of your cocks proves it. You’d crawl through glass just to stare, but you’ll never touch. That’s my power over you—making you ache, making you beg, and you’ll still thank me for it.” His hand faltered, a low groan escaping as he gaped, mesmerized by the sheer size, the flawless skin glistening under the dim lights, her nipples, —untouchable, divine.

She spun, locking eyes with a lanky blond guy, his jaw slack, hand pumping harder as she leaned in just enough to let her perfume—a sweet, dizzying haze—curl around him. “You’re all mine, aren’t you?” she cooed, her tone dripping with mock pity. “One flash of these, and your brains have melted—cocks so hard you can’t think straight. You’d sell your souls for a feel, but I decide who gets that privilege. You’re just puppets, stroking yourselves stupid, and I’m the one pulling the strings.” His eyes widened, a strangled moan slipping out, his strokes turning frantic as her words sank in, stoking the fire of his desperation.

Then she turned to Phil, front and center, his beer clutched with white knuckles, his cock tenting his jeans, fixated on her bare chest like it was his salvation. Chloe drifted toward him, bending low so her tits hung inches from his face, nipples grazing the air. “But you, Phil,” she purred, voice softening to a dangerous whisper, “you’re special. You’ve been a good boy, tipping us off about the street, saving our skins. That earns you something extra.” She straightened, smirking at the others. “Not you lot—keep your hands to yourselves. Phil’s the only one who gets a taste of what you’ll never have.”

Phil’s breath hitched, a soft “fuck” tumbling out, his whole body trembling as she leaned closer. “Touch them, Phil,” she commanded, voice velvet over steel. “Feel your reward.” His hands shot up, tentative at first, then greedy, palms pressing against her bare tits, fingers sinking into the soft, warm flesh. He groaned loud, a raw, wrecked sound, as he squeezed, thumbs brushing her nipples, the weight and heat overwhelming him. Chloe let him indulge—kneading, caressing, tracing every curve—her smirk widening as he lost himself, his cock twitching visibly.

“Feel that, Phil?” she murmured, leaning into his grip. “That’s my power—giving you what they’re dying for. You’re mine now, hooked so deep you’ll do anything I ask, won’t you?” He nodded, dazed, hands roaming, squeezing harder as her nipples hardened under his touch, the pleasure flickering through her but never breaking her control. The others watched, hands pumping furiously, moans of envy and anguish filling the air, their desire spiking at the sight of Phil’s privilege—a forbidden dream played out before them, her bare tits a prize they’d never claim.

Denise took another sip, the bitter tang grounding her as she watched them fall apart. Chloe’s tits carving through their defenses, baring their lust—but this move with Phil? A cruel, brilliant twist. The men craved her—craved the impossible weight of those tits in their hands, the taste on their tongues, the chance to drown in that hypnotic valley forever. Phil’s groans mixed with the others’ ragged breaths, their strokes wild and desperate, each one enslaved to her voice, her body, her whims. Chloe basked in it, knowing she’d snared them all—Phil most of all—her power pulsing through every greedy stare, every twitching cock.

Denise’s grip tightened on her drink. This was Neil’s play—Chloe trancing the men, him wooing the women—but it felt too neat, too smooth. Where was the circlet’s usual mess? Denise slipped back to the living room, The brunette grabbed Denise’s arm, mojito sloshing. “Real talk,” she pressed, “you’re fine with Neil flirting like that? I’d lose it.”

Denise forced a laugh, shrugging her off. “He’s a charmer. Keeps things fun. I don’t sweat it.” But her eyes darted—Neil was gone from the bar, Brandon too. Then she spotted two girls slinking back from the bedroom hall, hair mussed, giggling. Her stomach dropped. She stormed over, shoving past a cluster of guests, and found Neil and Brandon high-fiving, clothes rumpled, grinning like idiots. “Six down, four to go,” Neil beamed.

“Neil, what the hell?” she snapped, voice cutting through their triumph. “You’re sleeping with *all* of them?”

Neil spun, eyes wide with panic. “Fuck,” he mouthed, hands shooting up. “Honey, it’s part of the plan—for us\!” His voice turned smooth, coaxing, and suddenly her fury faltered. A wave of heat flooded her, her pussy lubricated itself like someone turned on a hose. She wanted to be mad—should be mad—but his charm was a drug, and she was hooked.

“Well, okay,” she relented, melting into his arms, “but I’ve been serving drinks all night. Don’t I deserve some attention?” Her tone softened, needy despite herself.

Neil hesitated, then grinned. “Bran, you handle the rest. I’m taking care of my special girl.” 

“Sure mate, I can handle this no problem” Brandon grinned as he went off to get his next conquest.

Neil swept Denise off her feet, her dress riding up as he carried her into their bedroom. The door clicked shut behind them, muffling the party’s hum, and he set her down on the silk-draped bed, his hands already roaming.

“Neil,” she breathed, half-protest, half-plea, as he peeled the dress from her shoulders, exposing her skin to the cool air. His lips found her neck, hot and insistent, trailing kisses that sparked fire down her spine. “You’re a bastard, you know that?”  
“ Your bastard,” he murmured against her throat, fingers deftly unhooking her bra. It fell away, and he cupped her breasts—full, perfect, a gift from the circlet—thumbs brushing her nipples until they stiffened. She gasped, arching into him, her anger dissolving into raw want. Trust might be shaky, but this—this was solid, primal.

He shoved his jeans down, kicking them aside, his cock springing free—thick, hard, a match for the man he’d become. She tugged at his shirt, desperate to feel his skin, and he obliged, tossing it off as he pressed her back onto the bed. His weight pinned her, a delicious cage, and he kissed her deep—tongue claiming hers, tasting of beer and promise. Her hands clawed his back, nails digging into muscle as she wrapped her legs around his hips, pulling him closer.

“Fuck, Denise,” he groaned, breaking the kiss to nip at her collarbone. His hand slid between them, fingers finding her soaked panties and shoving them aside. He teased her clit, circling slow, then fast, until she bucked against him, a whine escaping her throat. “You’re mine, yeah? No matter what.”

“Yes,” she gasped, hips grinding into his touch. “Just—fuck me already.” She needed him inside her, needed to feel that trust rebuilt in the only way they knew how.

He didn’t tease longer. Lining up, he thrust in—hard, deep, filling her with a single stroke that stole her breath. She cried out, pussy clenching around him, slick and hungry. He set a relentless pace, hips slamming into hers, the bed creaking under them. Each thrust drove deeper, his cock stretching her perfectly, hitting that spot that made her see stars. She raked her nails down his spine, urging him on, her moans loud enough to drown the party beyond the door.

“God, you feel so good,” he growled, one hand gripping her thigh to spread her wider, the other tangling in her hair. He yanked her head back, exposing her neck to his teeth, marking her as his. She shuddered, pleasure coiling tight in her core, every nerve alight. The circlet had shaped her body, but this—Neil’s raw need, his dominance—shaped her soul.

“Harder,” she demanded, voice breaking, and he obeyed, pounding into her with a ferocity that shook the frame. Her tits bounced with each thrust, his eyes dark with lust as he watched, and she loved it—loved being his, loved the power in surrender. The tension built, a wildfire spreading from her clit to her toes, and she clawed at him, desperate for release.

“Cum for me,” he rasped, thumb finding her clit again, rubbing in tight, ruthless circles. That was it—she shattered, orgasm ripping through her like a storm, her pussy spasming around him as she screamed his name. Waves of bliss crashed over her, thighs trembling, vision blurring, and he didn’t stop—fucking her through it, prolonging the high until she was a writhing mess beneath him.

“Fuck—Denise—” he grunted, thrusts stuttering as he chased his own edge. She tightened around him, milking him, and with a guttural roar, he came—hot, thick spurts flooding her, his body shaking as he emptied himself. He collapsed onto her, sweaty and spent, their breaths ragged in the quiet.

They lay tangled, hearts pounding, the party a distant hum beyond the walls. Neil’s breath was hot against her neck, his body still pressed into hers, slick with sweat. He shifted, propping himself on an elbow, and brushed a damp strand of hair from her face, his fingers lingering with a tenderness that belied the ferocity of moments before. “Trust me?” he murmured, his voice a low tease laced with something deeper, something serious.

Denise smirked, her chest still heaving as she caught her breath. “Working on it, stud.” She pulled him down, kissing him slow and deep, tasting the beer and the raw promise on his tongue. The heat of their connection lingered, her body humming from the intensity of his claim. Then she felt it—a subtle shift, like a lock clicking into place. The warmth of his cum inside her pulsed, spreading through her core, and with it came a flood of certainty, absolute and unshakable. The circlet’s magic—or maybe Neil’s own power—had woven its final thread. Her mind cleared, doubts evaporating like mist in sunlight. She was his, utterly, forever.

He rolled off her, sprawling on the silk sheets, and she curled into his side, her head resting on his chest. His heartbeat thudded beneath her ear, steady and strong.

She knew he’d take others—Chloe, the women here tonight—knew it was part of who he was, the man she’d chosen. But it didn’t sting anymore. The thought of him with them, their giggles and blushes, only sparked a quiet thrill in her now, a flicker of pride. He was hers to share, a master too potent to be contained, and she’d stand by him through it all, unwavering. No jealousy, no questions—just loyalty, pure and eternal, binding her to him as surely as the circlet had once bound her body.

“Love you,” she whispered, tracing a finger along the hard line of his jaw, her voice soft but firm, a vow sealed in the heat of their union.

“Love you too, babe,” he said, grinning that cocky grin she adored, pulling her closer. And as they drifted into the afterglow, the world beyond the bedroom fading, Denise knew she’d never leave—couldn’t leave. He was a ruthless conqueror of all he surveyed and she was his special girl, now and always, tethered by trust and something far deeper, something unbreakable.

A faint sound broke through the haze—footsteps, then Brandon’s low chuckle echoing down the hall as he ushered the last of the night’s conquests toward his bedroom. Moments later, a chorus of male voices erupted from the den, ragged and ecstatic: “Oh god, fuck yes\!” Chloe must’ve wrapped up her masterpiece, she mused, imagining the tranced men lost in ecstasy, their cocks finally erupting in blissful release under her spell. To the women still chattering obliviously in the living room, it’d pass for a cheer over a goal on the screen—men and football, nothing out of the ordinary. But it wasn’t just another chaotic night in their unruly house; no, now it was flawless, a perfect symphony of control and desire.

[Author note. The complete story can be purchased (12 Chapters) here. Find me on the Carefully Random discord server or the tag .bbarlow]

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